Oct 6 in 2024, Day-off fast passed

Saturday and Sunday that are my day-off for work were passed quickly ever week.

What I want to do in my day-off are to walk for a long time for my exercise, to practice an English textbook for a long time, but I cannot do them with my satisfaction.

I always think about my company work task. So, I think I cannot use my free time effectively.

I need a skill to switch my mind between work time and free time.

Corrected by Gramara:

Saturday and Sunday are my days off from work and I pass quickly every week.

My days off are for me to exercise and to practice an English textbook for a long time, but I cannot do so to my satisfaction.

I always think about my work tasks. I don’t think I can use my free time effectively.

I need the ability to switch my mind between work and free time.

Corrected by Chat GPT:

Here are the specific corrections:

1. “Saturday and Sunday that are my day-off for work were passed quickly ever week.”
   • Corrected to: “Saturdays and Sundays, which are my days off from work, pass quickly every week.”
   • “Saturday and Sunday” should be plural because you are referring to them generally.
   • “day-off” should be “days off.”
   • “were passed” should be “pass” to match the present habitual tense.
   • “ever” should be “every.”
2. “What I want to do in my day-off are to walk for a long time for my exercise, to practice an English textbook for a long time, but I cannot do them with my satisfaction.”
   • Corrected to: “What I want to do on my days off is take long walks for exercise and spend a long time practicing an English textbook, but I cannot do these to my satisfaction.”
   • “in my day-off” should be “on my days off.”
   • “are” should be “is” to match the subject (“What I want to do”).
   • “to walk for a long time for my exercise” is simplified to “take long walks for exercise.”
   • “practice an English textbook for a long time” sounds a bit unnatural; “spend a long time practicing an English textbook” is clearer.
   • “them” should be “these,” since it refers to multiple activities.
3. “I always think about my company work task. So, I think I cannot use my free time effectively.”
   • Corrected to: “I am always thinking about my work tasks, so I feel I cannot use my free time effectively.”
   • “always think” is better expressed as “am always thinking” in this context.
   • “company work task” should be “work tasks” for conciseness and clarity.
4. “I need a skill to switch my mind between work time and free time.”
   • Corrected to: “I need to develop the skill to switch my mind between work and free time.”
   • “a skill” is changed to “the skill” to specify a particular ability.
   • “develop” emphasizes the action of acquiring the skill.