Diary: Rescheduling the Regular Meeting Day and Time with Our Team(Nov 1, 2024)

Hi A, Thank you for contacting me, I can join tomorrow if we have a regular meeting with Rob, A, and me.

(Yes, Rob will be back tommrrow from vacation.)

Corrected:

Hi A, Thank you for reaching out. I can join tomorrow if we have a regular meeting with Rob, you, and me.

(Yes, Rob will be back from vacation tomorrow.)

修正ポイントと解説

1. “Thank you for contacting me” → “Thank you for reaching out”
   • “reaching out” は、ビジネスメールでの「連絡ありがとう」という表現として自然で丁寧です。
2. “with Rob, A, and me” → “with Rob, you, and me”
   • 名前と共に相手に敬意を示し、少し丁寧な印象にしました。
3. “(Yes, Rob will be back tommrrow from vacation)” → “(Yes, Rob will be back from vacation tomorrow)”
   • “tomorrow” のスペルミスを修正し、より流れがスムーズになるように位置を調整しました。