Diary: Confirming Information with Someone(Oct 31, 2024)

BD proposed this W, and they said A.

But as N-san said,I also cannot find it on the WEB and S now.

So, I will confirm it to BD about the background. And then, if there is not A, we have to delete this part.
Anyway, I will confirm it to BD member.

Corrected:

BD proposed this WC, and they mentioned A. However, as N mentioned, I also cannot find it on the web or on S now.

I will check with BD regarding the background. If A does not exist, we may need to delete this part.

In any case, I will confirm this with a BD member.

修正ポイントと解説

1. “and they said A” → “and they mentioned A”
   • “said” よりも “mentioned” の方が、「言及した」という意味で適切です。
2. “as N-san said” → “as N mentioned”
   • 英語では “さん” の敬称を省略するのが一般的です。また、「言った」という意味で “mentioned” を使うと、よりフォーマルです。
3. “cannot find it on the WEB and S” → “cannot find it on the web or on S”
   • “and” ではなく “or” にすることで、「どちらにも見つからない」という意味が明確になります。”web” の表記も一般的です。
4. “confirm it to BD” → “check with BD”
   • “confirm it to” よりも “check with” の方が、自然で意味が明確です。
5. “confirm it to BD member” → “confirm this with a BD member”
   • “confirm it to” ではなく “confirm with” を使い、より自然な表現にしました。