On Oct 15, 2024: SLII leadership training

SLII training sessions have 5 times.

One session has 2 hours. This is an online training joined about 10 participants.

This is an Interactive training with tutor and participants, so we have a tension to some degree.

Corrected:

The SLII training consists of five sessions.

Each session is two hours long. It is an online training with about 10 participants.

The training is interactive, involving both the tutor and participants, so there is a certain level of tension.

Explanation of Changes:

1. “SLII training sessions have 5 times” → “The SLII training consists of five sessions”
   • “Consists of” is a smoother and more natural way to describe the structure. “Five sessions” is clearer than “5 times.”
2. “One session has 2 hours” → “Each session is two hours long”
   • This version flows more naturally in English.
3. “This is an online training joined about 10 participants” → “It is an online training with about 10 participants”
   • “With” is the correct preposition to use when referring to participants. The phrase is adjusted for clarity and fluency.
4. “This is an Interactive training with tutor and participants, so we have a tension to some degree” → “The training is interactive, involving both the tutor and participants, so there is a certain level of tension”
   • “Interactive training” works better as a noun phrase at the beginning.
   • “Involving” is added for smoother phrasing.
   • “A certain level of tension” is more natural than “tension to some degree.”