I feel always busy at work.
I intend to work hard, but my tasks are accumulated every day.
So, I feel very busy and exhauseted.
Somtimes I feel myself that I am not good at coping with tasks, not efficienty.
I want to focus on a task. Now I feel mess.
Corrected by gramara:
I feel busy at work.
I intend to work hard, but my tasks are accumulating every day.
I feel very busy and exhausted.
Sometimes I feel that I am not good at coping with tasks, or that I am not efficient.
I want to focus on a task. I feel like a mess.
Corrected by Chat GPT:
“I always feel busy at work.
I intend to work hard, but my tasks accumulate every day.
As a result, I feel very busy and exhausted.
Sometimes I feel that I am not good at managing my tasks efficiently.
I want to be able to focus on one task at a time. Right now, I feel overwhelmed.”
Here are the specific corrections:
- “I feel always busy at work.”
- Corrected to: “I always feel busy at work.”
- The word order is adjusted for natural phrasing. “Always” comes before “feel” in this sentence.
- “I intend to work hard, but my tasks are accumulated every day.”
- Corrected to: “I intend to work hard, but my tasks accumulate every day.”
- “are accumulated” should be changed to “accumulate” to make the sentence active, rather than passive.
- “So, I feel very busy and exhauseted.”
- “Exhauseted” is a typo. It should be “exhausted.”
- “Somtimes I feel myself that I am not good at coping with tasks, not efficienty.”
- Corrected to: “Sometimes I feel that I am not good at managing my tasks efficiently.”
- “myself” is unnecessary here.
- “coping with tasks” is better expressed as “managing my tasks.”
- “not efficienty” is corrected to “efficiently.”
- “I want to focus on a task. Now I feel mess.”
- Corrected to: “I want to be able to focus on one task at a time. Right now, I feel overwhelmed.”
- “focus on a task” is expanded to “focus on one task at a time” for clarity.
- “I feel mess” should be “I feel overwhelmed” for a more natural and precise expression of your feelings.
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