I like my day-off that there no plans at that day.
No plan mean that I can spend my day-off by my own will.
Such a day off, I walk around nearby park and street with reading English textbook and taking a online English lesson.
These spending day is a most fantastic and precious for me, and I like that day.
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Corrected:
I like my days off when there are no plans.
No plans mean that I can spend my day however I want.
On such a day off, I walk around a nearby park and streets while reading an English textbook and taking an online English lesson.
These kinds of days are the most fantastic and precious for me, and I enjoy them very much.
Explanation for Article Changes:
- “I like my day-off that there no plans at that day.” → “I like my days off when there are no plans.”
- “Day-off” is pluralized to “days off” for natural expression.
- “That there no plans” is rephrased as “when there are no plans.”
- “No plan mean that I can spend my day-off by my own will.” → “No plans mean that I can spend my day however I want.”
- “Plan” should be plural as “plans.”
- “By my own will” is changed to “however I want” for more natural phrasing.
- “Such a day off, I walk around nearby park and street with reading English textbook and taking a online English lesson.” → “On such a day off, I walk around a nearby park and streets while reading an English textbook and taking an online English lesson.”
- Added “On” to make the sentence clearer.
- Changed “nearby park and street” to “a nearby park and streets” for proper grammar.
- “with reading” is rephrased as “while reading” to sound more natural.
- “These spending day is a most fantastic and precious for me, and I like that day.” → “These kinds of days are the most fantastic and precious for me, and I enjoy them very much.”
- “These spending day” is rephrased as “These kinds of days” for proper grammar.
- Changed “I like that day” to “I enjoy them very much” to align with plural usage.
を始めました。道のりは長いですが、意外にもレアジョブ英会話をやっていると英語の勉強だけでなく、毎日の非常に貴重な気分転換の時間になっていることに気が付きました。
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