I like my day-off that there no plans at that day.
No plan mean that I can spend my day-off by my own will.
Such a day off, I walk around nearby park and street with reading English textbook and taking a online English lesson.
These spending day is a most fantastic and precious for me, and I like that day.
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Corrected:
I like my days off when there are no plans.
No plans mean that I can spend my day however I want.
On such a day off, I walk around a nearby park and streets while reading an English textbook and taking an online English lesson.
These kinds of days are the most fantastic and precious for me, and I enjoy them very much.
Explanation for Article Changes:
- “I like my day-off that there no plans at that day.” → “I like my days off when there are no plans.”
- “Day-off” is pluralized to “days off” for natural expression.
- “That there no plans” is rephrased as “when there are no plans.”
- “No plan mean that I can spend my day-off by my own will.” → “No plans mean that I can spend my day however I want.”
- “Plan” should be plural as “plans.”
- “By my own will” is changed to “however I want” for more natural phrasing.
- “Such a day off, I walk around nearby park and street with reading English textbook and taking a online English lesson.” → “On such a day off, I walk around a nearby park and streets while reading an English textbook and taking an online English lesson.”
- Added “On” to make the sentence clearer.
- Changed “nearby park and street” to “a nearby park and streets” for proper grammar.
- “with reading” is rephrased as “while reading” to sound more natural.
- “These spending day is a most fantastic and precious for me, and I like that day.” → “These kinds of days are the most fantastic and precious for me, and I enjoy them very much.”
- “These spending day” is rephrased as “These kinds of days” for proper grammar.
- Changed “I like that day” to “I enjoy them very much” to align with plural usage.
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