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8/1～8/22　レアジョブ英会話のフィードバックで、文章の添削をしてもらった記録

*Accuracy* (Grammar)
You said: This is not fault airline company.
Correct: This is not the fault of the airline company.

1. You Said: human characteristics
Better: people’s personalities

2. You Said: a little bit slowly
Better: Tame

citizenship: 市民権

brutal: 野蛮な、残忍な、残酷な、荒々しい

Crash Landing on You: 愛の不時着

Dignity of Labor: 労働者の尊厳

You said: My wife and two children is tired.

Correct: My wife and two children ARE tired.

You said: I have been working at the same company over twenty years.

Correct: I have been working at the same company FOR over twenty years.

You said: My boss is Germany.

Correct: My boss is GERMAN.

You said: you seems very busy…

Correct: You seem very busy…

You said: have a pencil in my right hand

Better: hold the pencil in my right hand

You said: My boss said that finish my report before the three-day weekend.

Correct: My boss told me to finish my report before the three-day weekend.

You said: I said to my friend you are very busy.

Better: I said (that) you are very busy to my friend.

You said: My mom told me to have a pencil at my right hand.

Better: My mom told me to use a pencil in my right hand.

You said: The pasta’s volume is large.

Better: The pasta’s serving is large.

You: We don’t have a sea near here. Better:

We don’t have a sea nearby.

You said: If we don’t have train how to swim…

Better: If we don’t learn how to swim…

You said: One of the example.

Correct: One of the examples.

You said: After having a kids.

Correct: After having kids.

You said: I don’t have the confident.

Correct: I don’t have the confidence.

You said: I can image the situation.

Correct: I can imagine/picture the whole situation.

You said: He’s already been to the gym today.

Better: He’s already gone to the gym today.

You said: Yukiko is my third best friend.

Better: Yukiko is one of my best friends.

You said: My brother watches TV the best in my family.

Correct: My brother watches TV *the most* in my family.

You said: Yaki manju is the most famous foods in my area.

Better: Yaki manju is one of the most famous foods in my area.

*PHONOLOGY* singer [sing-er]

*ACCURACY*
You said: I asked whether he has a time.
Correct: I asked whether he had time.

*PHONOLOGY*
vacation [ vey-key-shuhn ]