レアジョブ英会話のフィードバックで、文章の添削をしてもらった記録
8/1～8/22 レアジョブ英会話のフィードバックで、文章の添削をしてもらった記録
*Accuracy* (Grammar)
You said: This is not fault airline company.
Correct: This is not the fault of the airline company.
1. You Said: human characteristics
Better: people’s personalities
2. You Said: a little bit slowly
Better: Tame
citizenship: 市民権
brutal: 野蛮な、残忍な、残酷な、荒々しい
Crash Landing on You: 愛の不時着
Dignity of Labor: 労働者の尊厳
You said: My wife and two children is tired.
Correct: My wife and two children ARE tired.
You said: I have been working at the same company over twenty years.
Correct: I have been working at the same company FOR over twenty years.
You said: My boss is Germany.
Correct: My boss is GERMAN.
You said: you seems very busy…
Correct: You seem very busy…
You said: have a pencil in my right hand
Better: hold the pencil in my right hand
You said: My boss said that finish my report before the three-day weekend.
Correct: My boss told me to finish my report before the three-day weekend.
You said: I said to my friend you are very busy.
Better: I said (that) you are very busy to my friend.
You said: My mom told me to have a pencil at my right hand.
Better: My mom told me to use a pencil in my right hand.
You said: The pasta’s volume is large.
Better: The pasta’s serving is large.
You: We don’t have a sea near here. Better:
We don’t have a sea nearby.
You said: If we don’t have train how to swim…
Better: If we don’t learn how to swim…
You said: One of the example.
Correct: One of the examples.
You said: After having a kids.
Correct: After having kids.
You said: I don’t have the confident.
Correct: I don’t have the confidence.
You said: I can image the situation.
Correct: I can imagine/picture the whole situation.
You said: He’s already been to the gym today.
Better: He’s already gone to the gym today.
You said: Yukiko is my third best friend.
Better: Yukiko is one of my best friends.
You said: My brother watches TV the best in my family.
Correct: My brother watches TV *the most* in my family.
You said: Yaki manju is the most famous foods in my area.
Better: Yaki manju is one of the most famous foods in my area.
*PHONOLOGY* singer [sing-er]
*ACCURACY*
You said: I asked whether he has a time.
Correct: I asked whether he had time.
*PHONOLOGY*
vacation [ vey-key-shuhn ]
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