On Oct 14, 2024: SLII leadership training

I took a traning session called SLII that is a method of making a team and coordinate with own subordinate.

In a nutshell, type of developing phase of people for four phases.

I could learn taht the appropriate way of interaction with subordinate is different And accoding to each phase,

Corrected:

I took a traning session called SLII, which is a method for building teams and coordinating with subordinates.

In a nutshell, it categorizes the development stages of people into four phases.

I learned that the appropriate way to interact with subordinates differs depending on each phase,

Here are the specific corrections:

1. “I took a traning session called SLII that is a method of making a team and coordinate with own subordinate.”
   • Corrected to: “I took a training session called SLII, which is a method for building teams and coordinating with subordinates.”
   • “traning” should be “training.”
   • “making a team” is better expressed as “building teams.”
   • “coordinate with own subordinate” is improved to “coordinating with subordinates” for clarity and grammar.
2. “In a nutshell, type of developing phase of people for four phases.”
   • Corrected to: “In a nutshell, it categorizes the development stages of people into four phases.”
   • “type of developing phase” is unclear, so it’s rephrased to “categorizes the development stages.”
   • “for four phases” should be “into four phases.”
3. “I could learn taht the appropriate way of interaction with subordinate is different And accoding to each phase,”
   • Corrected to: “I learned that the appropriate way to interact with subordinates differs depending on each phase.”
   • “taht” is a typo and should be “that.”
   • “way of interaction with subordinate” is better as “way to interact with subordinates.”
   • “according to” was misspelled as “accoding.”