On Oct 12, 2024: My son’s first tennis competition in junior high school

My son who is a first grade in the junior high school joined the tennis competition for the first time.

His pair won the first match and lost the second match.

My son sometimes succeeded his server and receive, and sometimes failed them.

I also felt joyful pairs of my son won at lease 1 match.

Corrected 1:

My son, who is in the first grade of junior high school, joined a tennis competition for the first time.

His pair won the first match but lost the second one.

My son sometimes succeeded with his serves and returns, and sometimes he missed them.

I was happy that my son’s pair won at least one match.

Here are the specific corrections:

1. “who is a first grade in the junior high school”
   • Corrected to: “who is in the first grade of junior high school.”
   • “a first grade” should be “in the first grade” for proper phrasing.
2. “His pair won the first match and lost the second match.”
   • “second match” can be shortened to “second one” for smoother language flow, though both are correct.
3. “My son sometimes succeeded his server and receive, and sometimes failed them.”
   • Corrected to: “My son sometimes succeeded with his serves and returns, and sometimes he missed them.”
   • “server” should be “serves,” and “receive” should be “returns” for proper tennis terminology.
4. “I also felt joyful pairs of my son won at lease 1 match.”
   • Corrected to: “I was happy that my son’s pair won at least one match.”
   • “felt joyful” is simplified to “was happy,” and “at lease” is corrected to “at least.”