Diary: Upcoming Publication of A According to NPI Schedule(Oct 26, 2024)

Will be published according to NPI of A on Nov 12.

Heard from Marketing team member that now being prepared for publication on the web.

Corrected:

It will be published according to the NPI schedule for A on November 12.

I heard from a member of the Marketing team that it is now being prepared for publication on the web.

修正ポイントと解説：

1. “Will be published” → “It will be published”
   • 主語（”It”）を加えることで、文がより明確になります。
2. “according to NPI of A” → “according to the NPI schedule for A”
   • “NPI of A” よりも “NPI schedule for A” の方がわかりやすく、「AのNPIスケジュールに従って」という意味が明確になります。
3. “Heard from Marketing team member” → “I heard from a member of the Marketing team”
   • 主語を追加し、”a member of the Marketing team” とすることで、文がより自然な構成になります。
4. “that now being prepared for publication on the web” → “that it is now being prepared for publication on the web”
   • “it is” を追加し、進行形の構文が成立するようにしました。