Diary: Request to Update Webpage with Evaluation Board Introduction(Oct 27, 2024)

Requesting the update of the WEB page on B.

A request item is to add introduction of A evaluation board that is provided by A.

Corrected:

“Requesting an update to the B webpage.

The requested item is to add an introduction of the A evaluation board provided by A.”

修正ポイントと解説：

1. “Requesting the update of the WEB page on B” → “Requesting an update to the B webpage”
   • “update to” の方が自然で、”webpage” は “WEB page” より一般的な表記です。
2. “A request item is to add introduction of A evaluation board” → “The requested item is to add an introduction of the A evaluation board”
   • より自然な形で、”The requested item is to add” としました。
3. “that is provided by A”
   • このままで問題ありませんが、さらにスムーズにするため、「A evaluation board provided by A」としました。